線上英文家教-易森語言第五次上課心得

今天花了很多時間在練習寫作,因為上次有回家作業,今天幾乎所有時間都花在那邊。

現在的進度還是在跟News有關的那一課。

今天跟老師邊討論邊寫了兩題問題,其中一題跟之前聽力無關,所以放上來也不會造成大家看不懂:

What is a news resister? What are some advantages and disadvantages to being a news resister?

A news resister is a person who resists to watch news or resists to take in too much news. There are advantages and disadvantages of being a news resister.  One of the advantages is news resister can spend more time to do some important things. There are more important things to prioritize in their lives to achieve happiness and satisfaction which could be related to careers and jobs.  So, if people spend more time improving themselves rather than focusing on news, they will be happier in their personal lives. The other advantage is, a news resister can keep his mind peaceful. He can avoid being stressed because of taking too much news.

One of the disadvantages is that news resister won’t know the weather. This means, he won’t know if he would bring umbrella when he goes out.  He won’t be prepared for any weather changes.  

Another disadvantage is news resister will not be able to easily to communicate with other people, because he won’t be able to discuss some popular news with his friends.   The other disadvantage is being left behind about some useful news.  If there are some positive news such as success stories, scientific breakthroughs, health knowledge, news resister will not know them.

粗體是被訂正的部分,我回家作業寫得太簡略,被硬逼著講了一堆想法出來。

有鑑於我根本就是一個News Resister所以我超瞭解我不看新聞的優點和缺點。

現在還是會有一些文法錯誤需要人訂正,且文章的連貫性並沒有很好。

句子與句子中間必須穿插一些文字,才能讓文章更流暢。

但第五次的上課,講出來的句子已經離修正後的句子相差不遠了。

反正用Skype上課的好處就是講錯也不會有第三個人知道,所以就可以大膽地講。

現實生活英文不太敢開口的原因大多是怕講錯很糗,在網路上就沒這問題。

要是進步到在網路上都沒講錯的話,我想現實中應該會比較有自信開口。

總之還有一段路要走,最近狀態不佳每天更新網誌的計畫暫時失敗。

希望過年後會好一點,下次上課剛好遇到除夕,所以再次上課就是2月了。

挑時段前沒看行事曆真是無言,但其他活動的時間也都排上去,沒有時間可以換時段。

我們下篇文再會!

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